User talk:PapiChulo

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The Holy Ghost chooses not to write as a man,

but less than one.

As a foaming, raving madman.

Yet, he only appears as such,

in the eyes of G-d's enemies.

- Johann Georg Hamann (1730-1788)


Hi,

Appreciate your contribution to the German question in World War I but the text you added is too long, not encyclopedic and argumentative in nature. Secondly, it will need to be filed on its on article (for instance if an article called "God exists" has been created, the counter-argument will have to be in page "God does not exist". I suggests changing your text to a much more pedagogical and encyclopedic format: you need to start by stating the thesis as simply as possible, not get the reader through some sort of loose poem. JFG (talk) 20:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)